Monday, October 13, 2008

Eccentric Love! True Love!


Though its not really in sonnet-formation here's my sonnet from Bennedick to Beatrice.


Through trickery if fell captive

Of a love i knew not of before.

For a maiden whose witful reaction

Threatened to put me through the floor.

Tis was her cunningness for which i fell

Her jocund i most adored.

A maiden whom can drive Satan out of hell

And wish a chap he never born.

But, my heart was hers before she asked.

A pawn in Cupid's hand twas i became.

I fell so quickly, like a maid at task,

Or a child too eager to join a game.

But tis she i worship like Elders at Stonehenge

My love forever hers, till the sands of time do end.

4 comments:

Doctor X said...

Wow, not bad.

What do you mean "sonnet formation"? And if it isn't in it, is it a sonnet?

Doctor X said...

Oh, but you forgot to answer the rest of the question.

xoxoT3nZ!nGxoxo said...

u have wonderfully presented benedick love towards beatrice .nice sonnet !

Anonymous said...

ohh...wow.. u really put lots of effort on this.